need some ui recommendations

So totally 6 images I sent here , all the contents was in 1 page and similar like this I have other pages as well but content would differ , when I saw this It kinda seems like I reading in Wikipedia so kinda I need any recommendations or iconsor image I can add and my site is based on digital marketing
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Sleep Twitch
Sleep Twitch5d ago
My first recommendation would be to have less wide lines, a maximum of 9 - 12 words on one line:
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Sleep Twitch
Sleep Twitch5d ago
That reads a lot nicer Also.. it is a loooot of text. People tend to not read anything when they see so much text. Another thing.. the blue parts of the header are very hard to read, not enough contrast with the black background I also find the headers pretty long Maybe divide the page in sections visually, so it doesn't seem like one very long block of text And the Let's work together is more like a hero type of thing. Those are generally not at the end of a page, but in the beginning Also, the blue social media links are hardly noticable on the dark background
Sleep Twitch
Sleep Twitch5d ago
For the steps you could do something like this, to make it a more distinguished part and to visually hint they are steps, instead of a lot of text:
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Sleep Twitch
Sleep Twitch5d ago
Also.. is this an exercise? Because it seems weird to me you make a website for a digital marketing company that also does design and you need help designing.. Another thing.. in the beginning the text says Public Limited Company (PLC). I think you only used the acronym only once in the text later, but you do use Public Limited Company a loooooot of times in the text.
vic
vicOP5d ago
I'm working on an institute company , they gave me an example of site and contents and I started working with that now I that guy wants me to do this , i have no idea so I came here Thats what they send , they told me to not change text content I hate this template as for blue color , i told him that line yellow is better but he wants blue I would make like this fir my steps
Sleep Twitch
Sleep Twitch5d ago
As for the colours.. now you have pure white on pure black, that is too much contrast. Maybe search the internet for how to use colors in dark mode Weird they want someone with no experience to design something
vic
vicOP5d ago
Alright will check out and thanks for the points section Lol
ἔρως
ἔρως5d ago
just to add to this: too much contrast can cause hallation for people with astigmatism basically, people with it will sorta see some halos around the text by the way, is that scrollbar visible to people with blue colorblindness?
vic
vicOP4d ago
I don't think of this as color blindness people Should I make my scrollbar as default or change the colour
ἔρως
ἔρως4d ago
test it, then decide
vic
vicOP4d ago
How to test that ? Sorry I never heard about these type of topics , can u share better article
ἔρως
ἔρως4d ago
chrome has tools to simulate visual issues you have to use the element inspector for it
vic
vicOP18h ago
Sure thank u

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