review on design
can you all give me feedback on how the design looks and stuff what to improve what's missing or whatever you think should be improved on
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There are 5 buttons on one page all vying for attention
This isn't much of a design though, more like a mockup, but that's okay. Learn the basics first and then start layering in more design elements
I recommend Gary Simmons on YT. Personally I don't think he's the best but he does a decent job at teaching the basics in an easy to understand way
he's an artist?
the 2 on the bottom are fixed/static
Internet Personality (first), Designer (second) imo
watched a few videos of him and im kinda confused... he barely talks about design in general just the art that he created
maybe you send a video that you found interesting and maybe might help me
I don't have any top of mind, sorry. If you look up web design tutorial or something equivalent in youtube there are lots of good creators other than Gary but I know he does have beginner content too, you may have just missed it
Look after for older Gary Simon videos. Basically I learnt the basics from him which allowed me to improve so much faster. But for the past months-years Gary has shifted his content types. Right now the one and only no-bullshitter I would recommend for anybody is Michal Malewicz (@malewiczhype on insta and @MalewiczHype on yt)
+1 for Michal Malewicz
Good job at putting yourself out there and following up on the suggestions given to you.
Looking at your mockup, I appreciate the space between elements. The fonts feel consistent too. However, I keep looking around to try to find where to focus. Guide me to a focal point and then lead me to the next important elements. The buttons are quite visible, but three go to the same thing. Using the green in the priority elements and as an accent could help lead me to where you want me to go and help settle my focus.
thanks a lot man
only 2 out of the 3 will be visible in mobile so had to make their number 3 and the one on the bottom left is fixed/static(it doesn't move when you scroll), thanks for the advice tho will definetly improve on that
actually michal malewicz is good i will watch his videos i will try to watch gary's videos too(to some extent)
no but the guy is interesting