Fitness crossfit Web Design Opinion

Person would like to give me your opinion about this landing page that I am developing, principally at the level of the hero section that I do not have great ideas, I started to apply the 8 point rule in the design to try to be more consistent, it continues with some errors but I am very badly satisfied with this design compared to the last. https://www.figma.com/file/FqF4D9xDsA8NHajp0jIaQO/GMY?type=design&node-id=0%3A1&mode=design&t=wdPEWFjnjSbtWpzf-1
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vince
vince15mo ago
I like it, font works pretty well. I'd tighten the leading (line-height) of the hero title
DoContra
DoContraOP15mo ago
Thanks a lot, you thins works better in CAPS?
DoContra
DoContraOP15mo ago
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DoContra
DoContraOP15mo ago
like this ?
vince
vince15mo ago
Could be an option. Lighten up the leading, you made it a bit too tight
DoContra
DoContraOP15mo ago
Oki Thanks bro
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