Feedback needed fot the layout and overall design

I added white blur blocks on the left and right sides and used a lot of images onb the page to make it more dynamic. I'm really curious to hear your thoughts, do you like the style? Feel free to share any feedback or suggestions for improvement!
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Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
Looks nice, maybe the shadows can be a bit more soft and less strong. And I would reduce the weight of some type, for example at the timeline
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Ok thanks for the nice advice how do like the behind blur on the right and left side ?
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
Can you point out an example, I'm not seeing it on first glance
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
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redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Or should we remove that
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
I think it looks fine like that Main improvement if you would ask me, is typography. The overall look is quite heavy
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
So reduce text or font style ? Or font weight ?
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
Font weight
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
This is an example: Titel bold and dark color, body regular and slightly lighter color
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Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
This is of course a common approach, in the end it's also subjective
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Which font ?
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
That I used in that example you mean?
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Yeah
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
This is Lato
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Oh thanks And what about my layout too How does the page look Like are the sections fine or do I need to add or remove sections ? At the end of the img there is a image of the whole page
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
First off 2 more font suggestions (they are more flowy so kinda fits the natural part): Quicksand or Nunito You do have some repeating elements that can be combined maybe Like frequently asked questions are kinda in 2 places Social proofs are at multiple sections (history, testimonals, recommendations) I would reduce the text in the history section and add the statics over there. Then you start of with a nice social proof section For the end I think it's nice like you have it: End with timeline, above that have the contact cta, above that the image show and above that testimonials And then you are just missing the service section [HEADER] [HERO] [SOCIAL PROOF] [SERVICES] [TESTIMONIALS] [IMAGE SHOW] [CONTACT CTA] [TIMELINE] [FOOTER] Maybe change the hero buttons, history is kinda weak since it's mentioned right below Have contact us as a secondairy button and have something else as primary
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Thanks Most of the content is made up and will be changed later
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
Mainly just reduce the repetitive content
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
Okay Let me try it thanks for you advice
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
Np, good luck
redcaus1235
redcaus1235OP2w ago
I will come later after changing the most
Hidi_
Hidi_2w ago
yeah do that

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