need feedback for layout design

I need a layout that improves my design. Do you have any suggestions?
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ἔρως
ἔρως8mo ago
feedback on what? the fonts? yeah, they are pretty. the layout? what layout?
2602065010_Eunike Imelda C
Layout for this font description I think its not eye catching when i do a presentation
Jochem
Jochem8mo ago
the spacing feels off, the margins on the boxes feel irregular, the fonts have no room to breathe under the heading, they're just kinda floating in space... I'd also recommend using a phrase rather than a dump of the full alphabet, there's a bunch of phrases that include all letters of the alphabet like The brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
ἔρως
ἔρως8mo ago
it feels like a font dump the sizes of the boxes isnt consistent too which makes it look super messy, even if everything else is fixed
Jochem
Jochem8mo ago
it looks a little like a test sheet for an old daisywheel or similar printer, the alignment and spacing is off enough that it looks like a preprinted sheet with boxes and nothing else, that you then test a new daisywheel or ball on
ἔρως
ἔρως8mo ago
i just noticed something i cant unsee the first box doesnt have the same padding on the left and right side i dont know anything about that but i believe you that classic sentence. yes, it is a good test case also, use pi to showcase the numbers
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