Chamber fanart repost

made by me :)) what character should i do next?
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Jack ♣
Jack ♣11mo ago
This Is Nice! Chamber Still Cool, Still Love Playing Chamber Despite The Nerf, Aim Sucks But Its Fine
MisterM0n5ter
MisterM0n5ter11mo ago
wow, nice art
Jaguar
Jaguar11mo ago
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Red
Red11mo ago
Very dynamic pose, and I love the style! The colors are so fun and vibrant and the slight 3dish effect really helps finish it May I offer a critique? I will not give it if you do not want it, however. It is a wonderful piece either way and you did a great job :ClapMushi_Pretz:
Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
ofcourse i do want your critique, it is has always a potential to make me progress further! also thank you very much i appreciate your previous messages :)) 🙏
Red
Red11mo ago
The gun handle gets lost and is difficult to read. I would recommend try adding more contrast to separate it from the clothing better!
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Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
you mean the white part?
Red
Red11mo ago
Nope The handle blends into the vest Its difficult to tell the vest apart from the gun handle and they blend in together
Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
ah yes ok i understand might've lighten the gun a bit like for the blacklines
Red
Red11mo ago
The same can be applied for here too, I didn’t really focus on this part till you said something about the white tbh, I’m not sure where the handle is and it becomes part of the sleeves
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Red
Red11mo ago
But otherwise it’s an amazing piece! I just feel like letting the gun pop from the clothing will just help elevate it and make it easier to read.
Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
i'm actually seeing it pretty clearly, but it depends on different monitor saturations people have
Red
Red11mo ago
Even when I raise it to full brightness it gets a bit lost, it’s hard to tell where exactly it ends or if it’s just shadows of the sleeve.
Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
yeah i should practice more on that, very good point
Red
Red11mo ago
I will also say, as someone who’s an artist myself, I tend to have an easier time reading my pieces than other people do my pieces, so it’s important for me to make those chances so those other people can see what I see! Does that make sense?
Sasoushii
SasoushiiOP11mo ago
very true, thanks alot for this, i really appreciate it
Red
Red11mo ago
:nod: Happy to help! Keep up the amazing work
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