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wow, nice art
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Very dynamic pose, and I love the style! The colors are so fun and vibrant and the slight 3dish effect really helps finish it
May I offer a critique? I will not give it if you do not want it, however.
It is a wonderful piece either way and you did a great job :ClapMushi_Pretz:
ofcourse i do want your critique, it is has always a potential to make me progress further! also thank you very much i appreciate your previous messages :))
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The gun handle gets lost and is difficult to read. I would recommend try adding more contrast to separate it from the clothing better!
you mean the white part?
Nope
The handle blends into the vest
Its difficult to tell the vest apart from the gun handle and they blend in together
ah yes ok i understand
might've lighten the gun a bit
like for the blacklines
The same can be applied for here too, I didn’t really focus on this part till you said something about the white tbh, I’m not sure where the handle is and it becomes part of the sleeves
But otherwise it’s an amazing piece! I just feel like letting the gun pop from the clothing will just help elevate it and make it easier to read.
i'm actually seeing it pretty clearly, but it depends on different monitor saturations people have
Even when I raise it to full brightness it gets a bit lost, it’s hard to tell where exactly it ends or if it’s just shadows of the sleeve.
yeah i should practice more on that, very good point
I will also say, as someone who’s an artist myself, I tend to have an easier time reading my pieces than other people do my pieces, so it’s important for me to make those chances so those other people can see what I see!
Does that make sense?
very true, thanks alot for this, i really appreciate it
:nod: Happy to help! Keep up the amazing work