what do you think about my redesign?
the map section made me feel like it was lacking something couldn't find out what. can yall help me. Thanks ALOT! the one on the left is the redesign
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In the original, the title and the images worked together to “tell and show” the idea of a big place.
In the redesign it’s lost…
In the original the map actually shows the location potential customers can recognize, in the redesign it’s a map of the entire city…
You should use the map from the original design in the redesign instead of those pictures as it's more prominent nd maybe try increasing the width of the text section a bit
I see. What do you recommend that I do about the redesign to make it better
So increase the size of the map, that seems like a good idea
Thanks a lot btw misha and azka
under the address, consider also providing the gps coordinates
Is it a paid project? What’s the goal(s) of the redesign?
no not really i'm just training with some randoms sites that i found. the design of the site looked a little bit old and out of fashion so i tried to redesign it into a fresher better looking one. failed but still trying
i don't think that would be necessary since nobody uses gps coordinates for places inside cities
well, they should
for example, last year, i had to do some routine exams at a clinic
i searched for the address on google maps, and it ended up showing near my house
problem is: the clinic is on the other side of the city, and there are 2 streets with a very close name
if i had the gps coordinates, i could have done the exams when i scheduled them, instead of having to re-schedule twice
lmao that's a very specific situation. unlikely. but i'll consider adding it if it doesn't ruin the design😭
you have lots of white space
im sure you can find some what to fit it
and yes, it is a very specific situation, and google maps isnt perfect
yeah but i'm about to redesign the whole thing so things might look different
i quite definitely agree on that one
well since im redesigning the whole thing i'll do it in a way i can fit that in ig
which one is the original?
Good) It’s a good way to practice. So, what I’ll recommend is: try to understand the end user goals, needs, and values. Try to understand business goals and USPs. Try present them visually as much as possible. And see if your redesign will help everyone better than current design))
No the text i mean give it some more room to breathe cause it just looks like a long pole this way
one on the right
does that i mean that i should focus on ux more than ui(i will try to improve on both but which is "more" important)
i know you meant the text i was talking about the map
Not exactly))
Why did you placed the map and the “big well equipped place” info into same section?
you have space under the address