Check my site I created for my project in school (you probably won't understand the text)
https://lovely-swan-09f5fa.netlify.app/
I wanna know what you guys think about the design!
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thanks, i’ll do it
Hey air, it's not a bad start. I like both the dark and light mode color palettes. And there is a good balance between text and imagery.
1. I don't think Oswald and Open Sans have enough variation to justify using both fonts. You could probably default to one or the other and be done with it.
2. Unless you have a good reason not to, you should default to the standard Logo in the header/nav bar on the left. It feels empty and takes away the key branding opportunity once the viewer scrolls below the hero section.
3. Your nav items are not in order of the page layout, and 4 of the 5 links go to the same area. You can just combine them into one nav link called like 'information'. Or, better yet, build out these individual sections so they actually need their own navigation links.
4. Your section titles are not consistent. About is yellow, but services and rates are white. And contact / opening / map don't even have a title at all. Use consistent styling on your titles, and make them bigger. At least 1.5-2x the size of your body text (so in this case 34-44px)
5. Vertical white spacing between sections is too narrow. Probably need to at least double the space above and below the content in each section.
Contact and opening has a title, they are just not as big as the others.
And by the 5th, you mean that i should increase the padding on the sections?
yep that's what I meant, give those sections room to breathe, 👍
https://lovely-swan-09f5fa.netlify.app/
what about now?
did some changes